First Conference

I thought my first conference was extremely helpful. You pointed out exactly what you liked in my introduction paragraph, which gives me an idea as to how I should structure or write the rest of my paper. I like how you individually took the time to thoroughly check each and every paper, and not just rush through them. I thought your criticism was very fair, and when it comes to improving something I take any kind of guidance from a teacher as constructive criticism which I believe you gave me a lot of. I really hope wehave a couple more conferences like this one to cover some more of my paper aside from my introduction paragraph.